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Part three by ~LizStewart:iconLizStewart:

Categories Traditional Art > Paintings > Abstract

©2005-2009 ~LizStewart
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A commission. A real one. For real money. Thus it needs to be good so i'm relying on you to tell me what this is missing, its definitely lacking. (although i feel the overlap of my sisters bed cover really adds something special).
I guess its virtually the same as two of my previous submissions, I spose i'll call it a series of three to excuse myself. But if it works and people like it why not?

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~Will575 Jan 21, 2005, 4:49:09 AM
i likw it alot....the flame is just like that of part 1. It does need something though....a blueprint of a house, or a cross, or shadows of people would prpbably not be the best option
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`De-Profundis Jan 21, 2005, 5:06:51 AM
lovely lovely lovely. the only thing i could think of suggesting, is some sort or detailing in the white. scratchy things.. er.. sorry :O but it is beautiful

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yum.
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~LizStewart Jan 21, 2005, 5:58:44 AM
but thats what i do. you're right i guess. (i am so reluctant to ever say that.)
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~LizStewart Jan 21, 2005, 5:59:59 AM
thanks. theres some stitching and tiny pencil scratchy things in there but it doesnt really show up, maybe i should make it more pronounced. I dont know. Thanks for commenting.
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~KITisATtheOASIS Jan 21, 2005, 8:59:48 AM
Well, maybe your stitching/pencil scratching shows up better when viewed in person? I mean, I don't think you'd want to forfeit your subtle hand just so something shows up in a digital photo, right? I think we all know that the quality of an artwork is 100 times better when viewed in person. (ha, i liked the comment about your sisters bedcover. I always have part of the sides showing when i take photos of my paintings, just cuz im too lazy to set up prpperly.)
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~pierced--- Jan 22, 2005, 12:29:52 AM
mmm..maybe on the left hand side..some more of that rust colour could be added and maybe abit of a deeper rusty red to.. in a kind of dribbling-down-the-wall effect...maybe...
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!AllTheWorldsSquirrel Jan 22, 2005, 11:08:08 AM
Ahhhhh, all I can say is fuck am I jealous of your talent.

I would pay to hang that on my wall.

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tearing off tights with my teeth
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~flesh-was-sweet Jan 23, 2005, 3:49:03 AM
Excellent work - almost reminds me of Georgia O'Keeffe's darker style paintings of the skulls etc... - brilliant - I love it!

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-It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right. I hope you had the time of your life.-
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~MessedUpMind Jan 23, 2005, 1:30:43 PM
Some more yellow along the flame... Orangey fire.. .And someting in the white space. Like the squares (windows?) behind... Except black/grey. Maybe?
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